Hello friends I am sorry for the late update. I again forgot to drink water which caused me dehydration …. I tried updating but couldnt cause my head is paining and all thanks to kalpana di aka maaneetfavo who came to help me. She only wrote this update after giving the synopsis. Such a sweet person she is and kalpana di thank you so much even though I have the synopsis you penned it beautifully for me. Thank you. Now scroll down for update.


The person comes running to SHIVIKA room and breaks it as the room is not being opened after knocking for ten minutes. He gets shocked to see SHIVIKA dead and ANIKA head touched in SHIVAY cheeks..
Man screaming “no nothing happen to SHIVAY..he cannot die and man placed ANIKA body to bed, he turn SHIVAY body from ANIKA lap as lay in bed and but SHIVAY held ANIKA palm tightly. he tries to wake ONLY SHIVAY by giving punching his heart etc but no use. He gets frustrated as he cant save SHIVAY…
Man: no i want save him at any cost..with angry voice..
Neighbour and hotel staff enter in SHIVIKA room hearing man screaming .
Staff : what happened to them..with worried tone.
Man: plz help me and bring him to hospital with frustrated voice.
Staff scared : ok sir..others also helped man and take them to car..he cannot stop them as they take ANIKA also to car..
Man shout : doctor ..
Doctor come outside his cabin and look at man
Doctor: who r u, why r u shouting..
Man grabbed doctor and point out SHIVAY: save him. as doctor checked SHIVAY and ANIKA
The doctor says both SHIVAY and ANIKA are in critical position and cannot save them. But the person begs to save SHIVAY at any cost and doctors say they will try The reception asks him who he is to patient then it will reveal his name is DAKSH SINGH. Yes he will save SHIVAY. After giving his details he will sit on chair and thinks flashback about why he is saving SHIVAY and how he came here.

In flashback when DAKSH came to know that ANIKA will kill SHIVAY after marriage in the breakfast he left to Mumbai so that he can wont be a suspect in murder.
In mumbai
DAKSH tapped one man shoulder and man turn back look at DAKSH.
Man: hi DAKSH…what r u doing and if SHIVAY sir also come with u with surprised face
DAKSH: no lawyer sir, i come for office work with hestitate r u sir with sugar coated voice.
Lawyer: iam fine DAKSH..last time SHIVAY sir asked about his property details, i thought if he come with u in Mumbai..i will discuss about his property detail.
DAKSH smirked hearing SHIVAY property: sir, u know very well , SHIVAY sir have no sibling even close relation except dadi..if SHIVAY sir is dying.( Lawyer look at DAKSH weirdly)not think me wrong if suppose anything happen to SHIVAY sir then his property belongs to which person with curious face
Lawyer: why u suddenly ask about property detail DAKSH with doubting face.
DAKSH: sir, just for knowegde..SHIVAY sir not only my boss..he is my friend also.
Lawyer: i understand DAKSH ur concern about ur friend
The lawyer tells him that the property belongs to orphanage if SHIVAY dies. And DAKSH gets shocked
DAKSH: u saying, if anything happen to SHIVAY.his whole property going to orphanage with shocked face
Lawyer : yes DAKSH ,ok DAKSH..i need go now..tell SHIVAY sir..i come meet him in delhi.
DAKSH grinned teeth: sure lawyer sir
DAKSH mind thought: if ANIKA killed SHIVAY ..whole property goes to orphanage..dammit..i want stop ANIKA before she do any crazy thing..
he calls to office
employee: yes , DAKSH sir with irriating voice
DAKSH: where is SHIVAY sir..he is alright with worried voice.
employee: ofcourse he is alright, he went to Mumbai.
DAKSH relief SHIVAY came for Mumbai not with ANIKA after sec he think , if ANIKA also company with him.
DAKSH: where is ANIKA..she is in delhi right.with bossy tone
employee got irritated hearing his bossy tone : hello mister, u already fired in job..dont do any bossy voice with me.u r cheap character as abusing jeevika .u r bossing me.
DAKSH realised (mind) : SHIVAY know about jeevika what i will do. First i want confirm as nothing happen to SHIVAY with pulling his hair
DAKSH voice become soft tone: iam sorry..plz say SHIVAY sir going to Mumbai alone right.
Employee: he have beautiful wife with him..why he going alone to Mumbai with taunting tone.
DAKSH screamed : what ANIKA also went to Mumbai with SHIVAY.
Employee: yes sir, what is ur problem with mocking tone.
DAKSH: plz say, where they stay in Mumbai.
Employee say he is in mumbai xyz hotel along with ANIKA. When he heared this he is running to hotel and knock the door to stop ANIKA as she is not lifting phone. Then he gets angry as SHIVAY is dead and all property will go to orphanage so he tries to save him thats why he did not care about saving ANIKA. Now he saved them by admitting in hospital

DAKSH walking in hospital corridor one side to another side.
DAKSH : why doctor take more time come out from room..plz god save SHIVAY for not him sake .for my sake.
After few minutes
Doctor come out to room and DAKSH almost bumped to doctor..
DAKSH: u saved him right, nothing happened to him.he cannot die right without take single sec breathe.plz open ur mouth, doctor.
Doctor: u stop only, i talk right..nothing happened to them..
Doctor say that SHIVAY and ANIKA are saved as they pumped all the poison blood now they are unconcious. Doctor asks to wait for another two days for rest after that they will say SHIVAY is fine as he is strong but ANIKA is still very week and SHIVAY got concious so he can meet SHIVAY and ANIKA is week dont meet her.
DAKSH not worried about ANIKA if she is alive or not
DAKSH: thank u doctor.
Doctor smiled : man really lucky got u like good friend and left the place
DAKSH grinned teeth: good friend, he is one only enemy in my life but today i saved him in my own u escaped from ur die but ur dead because of mine only, SHIVAY with evily face.
DAKSH enter SHIVAY room with fake worried face.
SHIVAY got conscious and murmuring ANIKA name .
DAKSH : he always thinking ANIKA only.
SHIVAY open eyes and his vision has blur.because of drugs effect and hearing DAKSH voice.
DAKSH:SHIVAY sir with fake worried voice.
SHIVAY: DAKSH ..SHIVAY closed his eyes and then opened as his vision cleared.
SHIVAY: DAKSH, what r u doing here..where i am, he remember ANIKA..where is ANIKA.
DAKSH: sir, ANIKA alright..she is still weak but she is alright.
SHIVAY: what she weak..what happen with her..he tried wake up in bed but DAKSH controlled him
DAKSH: sir..nothing happen to ANIKA..she is safe..
SHIVAY relaxed: what happen with me..i cannot remember anything after i ate kheer..i become stupor.
DAKSH: i think someone mixed poison in ur food..thank god i reached corrected time..i save both of u with little fake happy face.
SHIVAY: poison..with doubting face.
DAKSH: dont worry i will take care everything afterall iam ur employee
SHIVAY hand gestured stop to talk: thank u for saving my ANIKA , i already fired from u r job but i cant give your job back because you abused jeevika.ur good time , u saved my ANIKA then only i am not say arrest u for jeevika matter.
DAKSH: SHIVAY sir, plz trust me..i didnot abused her..u mistaken me. Dont fired from my job with fake crying face.
DAKSH tries to request SHIVAY but he wont listen to give him job and says ask anything except for your job.
DAKSH fakes sadness and goes away asking him nothing.
DAKSH come out to SHIVAY room and hit his hand to wall
DAKSH: i never enter in Kc anymore and my last hope , ANIKA only..she such a emotional stupid..she do what i am saying with smirked face
Next he will go to meet ANIKA even after knowing she is week he will wake her up from sleep
ANIKA not open her eyes and he tapped her cheeks little forceily
ANIKA : SHIVAY with slow voice.
DAKSH got angry (mind):after wake up from her unconscious ,she also saying his name like SHIVAY did
ANIKA look at DAKSH face: SHIVAY, how SHIVAY is
DAKSH angry glaze to ANIKA and starts his questions like why did you not tell me before mixing poison , why u didnot inform me .but ANIKA not caring his angry ,her mind only thinking about SHIVAY..she want know he is alright or not.even she not worried about her…she did not know why she worried about him..why her heart screaming for his safety.why heart saying ,if u heart beating as he heart also beating.
ANIKA asks how SHIVAY is
DAKSH shout: he is alright .i only saved u both from ur poison food
ANIKA confused look at DAKSH ( mind) : why did DAKSH save SHIVAY .
DAKSH faked lovely voice and cupped her cheeks: because of u, i save him..i love u ANIKA. I want u in my whole life.i dont want u go to jail and i cannot see ur die.i have plan for ruin him with smirked face
ANIKA :what plan..
Then DAKSH say a plan to ANIKA about why he saved and what they must do next making her shock
ANIKA says I am week I cant
DAKSH got angry but control himself : dont say u fallen love with fake SHIVAY love with little hurt tone.
ANIKA : no, its not true..
DAKSH reminds her about her dead parent and destroyed friends etc and make her agree. Finally DAKSH smirks evilly thinking about his plan.



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